This week we had to write a recount about what we did in the holidays or during our school sports day. Here is my work:
Term 2 Photo Capture Recount
Task: Write a recount about the photo snapshot.
Remember to:
Include an introduction for your audience and a conclusion to wind up your recount.
Organise your recount into paragraphs and make sure you begin each paragraph with a time sequencing adverb or phrase.
Using descriptive language to engage your reader.
Use hooks and a variety of sentence structures and beginnings.
It was either night or morning, I can’t remember. I was watching fantastic marshmello music videos. My cousin don't know what he was up to on his new phone
My other cousin (nicknamed Fatty, don't know why) he was playing gta with their cousin.
We had some mini mint mentos and some multi fizzy pack and yummy sour lollies. It was really fun that's all we did so this is the end. We also had awesome burgers and chips for dinner, now this is the end.
the end
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